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The caramel to my apple

August 9, 2010
By Casper GOLD, Couer D&#39 Alene, Idaho
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Casper GOLD, Couer D&#39 Alene, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"I love you still...But I love him just as much and he hasn't hurt me like you have" -Casper-

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You take my breath away. 
You may not be perfect
But who says perfect is the best 
Way to go anyways
When I'm with you feel like 
The glass is half full rather
Than half empty
You make everyday an adventure
The only thing I hate about you is
You really don't know how much i
Really like you. 
Your the pea to my pod
The caramel to my apple
The chocolate to my strawberry
The peanut to my butter
Before you came into my life
I was doing pretty good
But when you came into my life
My life suddenly became wonderful
And I'mma stick with you 
As long as you let me.

© Julia K., Old Tappan, NJ

The author's comments:
I wrote this piece about the first guy I ever thought I was actually falling for.
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Casper GOLD said...
on Sep. 20 2010 at 11:47 pm
Casper GOLD, Couer D&#39 Alene, Idaho
14 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love you still...But I love him just as much and he hasn&#039;t hurt me like you have&quot; -Casper-

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Yes me to. lol. This has always been my favorite poem(:
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2010 at 2:19 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

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Great job. Ive always loved this poem! (:
Casper GOLD said...
on Sep. 5 2010 at 9:58 pm
Casper GOLD, Couer D&#39 Alene, Idaho
14 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love you still...But I love him just as much and he hasn&#039;t hurt me like you have&quot; -Casper-

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Thanks animaluvr. lol. I love yout to(:
animaluvr said...
on Sep. 5 2010 at 2:10 pm
Casper this a great one. i luv ya.