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Freespirit

August 12, 2010
By TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers. <br /> Orison Swett Marden<br /> <br /> &quot;The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say.&quot; - Anais Nin<br /> <br /> we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

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For long I had longed for freedom
Now the time has come;
To break free from the shackles who bind me to explore!
Its time that I be a free bird.
Time to spread my wings.
No longer am I the diffident person you once knew;
My knew life beckons me ut old ways run deep;have me in their grips.
But I know for sure it is evanescent.
My life wont exacerbate for the worst has passed.
You made my life a living hell,it has been odious since.
But now the time has come and I will be a free flying bird!
I am a free spirit,not to be caged!

© Tabatha B., Peoria, IL

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This is just a thought which came to me sitting in biology class.
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TanviKusum DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 5 2012 at 1:14 pm
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
89 articles 4 photos 197 comments

Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers. <br /> Orison Swett Marden<br /> <br /> &quot;The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say.&quot; - Anais Nin<br /> <br /> we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

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thanks so much rose. :)
LunaLives GOLD said...
on Oct. 5 2012 at 1:07 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Because I can!-Me &quot;Life is a choice and death is a decision&quot;-Lil Wayne

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I know exactly what that poem was talking about. You did a really great job.
TanviKusum DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 5 2012 at 8:20 am
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers. <br /> Orison Swett Marden<br /> <br /> &quot;The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say.&quot; - Anais Nin<br /> <br /> we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

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thankss kanu :D
TanviKusum DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 5 2012 at 8:18 am
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers. <br /> Orison Swett Marden<br /> <br /> &quot;The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say.&quot; - Anais Nin<br /> <br /> we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

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Thank you so much Sarah, I really appreciate you words! :D
Songs_Along GOLD said...
on Oct. 5 2012 at 8:11 am
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&quot;Sometimes we are only given a few minutes to be with the one we love and a thousand hours to spend just thinking about them.&quot;

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wow....what an enrapturing poem! :)
Sarah_is_me said...
on Oct. 5 2012 at 5:48 am
This a great poem that talks about wanting to be yourself and to well "be free" :D I love these kinds of poems, and I love yours! One think that really stood out to me was that you addressed the shackles that bound you as a "who" and that as a "that". That really adds emphasis and structure to your poem. Great job and keep it up!
MonsterGirl2000 SILVER said...
on Oct. 1 2012 at 1:29 pm
MonsterGirl2000 SILVER, Des Moines, New Mexico
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I love this peice. It describe alot of feelings.