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Enough of this

September 20, 2010
By OkuniTachibana GOLD, Warrensville Heights, Ohio
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OkuniTachibana GOLD, Warrensville Heights, Ohio
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As the fallen soldier walks up to the gates of heaven to St.Peter he says "another soildier reporting sir ive served my time in hell"

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I see fighting were ever i stare
Guns are blazing everywhere
I see hate in everyones eyes
This war started over many lies
Innocents dying over something they didnt do
All this war is nothing new
We should stop fighting and live in peace as one
We may not be able to undo what we had done
but we cant stop now and avoid more wrong
we should come together like the words of a song
enough fighting stop it please
we can stop it with little ease
i had enough of this death destruction and hate
Enough determining innocents fate
Enough stop it before its too late

© Katie P., Bethesda, MD

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I was watching the news and this war in iraq inspired me to write
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OkuniTachibana GOLD said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 12:14 pm
OkuniTachibana GOLD, Warrensville Heights, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
As the fallen soldier walks up to the gates of heaven to St.Peter he says "another soildier reporting sir ive served my time in hell"

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Thank u to me all this is true i hate war and it should stop now

 

trblue GOLD said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 10:50 am
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
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"Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&* upside the head. "

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I love your poem.

and i belive in every word.

it's truly good, but

i cant tell you that more enught.

your emotion for it is brathtaking.

OkuniTachibana GOLD said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 9:10 am
OkuniTachibana GOLD, Warrensville Heights, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
As the fallen soldier walks up to the gates of heaven to St.Peter he says "another soildier reporting sir ive served my time in hell"

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Itryed to cpture my true thoughts of war but it was a little dificult for me but im glad i wrote it in the end