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When the sun falls

October 13, 2010
By DestinyMartinez PLATINUM, Boca Raton, Florida
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DestinyMartinez PLATINUM, Boca Raton, Florida
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"Never know that you love someone untill they're gone."

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Black clouds.
Humid air.
Wet cheeks.
You don't care wheather I'm dead or alive you will always love me.
No sun at dawn.
No moon at night.
Only darkness can be seen.
penetrating love you give me so healing but also a deadly posion.
Scared of the dark.
No light switches turned on.
Darkness swallowing me inch by inch.
Running away with no final destination.
One at last with my surroundings.
No escape but acceptance.
I should of know that loving you wouldn't end right.
When the sun fell from the sky.

© Crystal E., Charlotte, NC

The author's comments:
Love is sometimes not always its made out to be. People think it takes you to paradise but sometimes it cuts out all the lights.
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