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October 22, 2010
By PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

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In my bed crying
people calling me,"What's wrong?"
and all I told them
is,"That boy is so wrong."

They asked,"What happened now?"
I said,"That boy talking crap."
They said,"Girl I told you
you should've gave him a slap."

I know I should have
but I trusted him so much
now I know what he really is
all he wants is touch.

I hope he knows
I'm not that kind of girl
I don't even wear my hair
all pinned up and curled.

I am a person
who just likes to play around
I AM THIS ONE AND ONLY GIRL
who really really hates clowns.

I am tired of being told
all that you do
now I really wonder
do I even know you?

Hey but get this
when I don't see you,my day is good
and don't think it's because
I grew up the hood.

Everythime I look at you
I just shake my head
I at times actually wish
my feelings for you are dead.

My girls got my back
I can see you don't
you mess with me, you mess with them
and they aint no joke.

So I am moving on
your left in the dark
I hope you know
your crossed out my heart.

© Michelle B., West Covina, CA

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PrincessPea PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 4:31 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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oops and my I WONDER
PrincessPea PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 9 2010 at 3:28 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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CAN U GUYS PLZ CHECK OUT MY POEM 1 LIFE 1 CHANCE
PrincessPea PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 9:18 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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tanks much:)
Alisha62293 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 8:37 pm
Alisha62293 BRONZE, Warwick, Rhode Island
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i love your word choice. keep up the good writing, i would love to read more of your work.
PrincessPea PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 6:06 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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lol thaks much now at least ppl understand me
PrincessPea PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 6:05 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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thanks much
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 6:01 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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**other poems is what i meant to say :)
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 6:00 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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I really really like this peom! the rythm is greattt :) awesome job! ha ha I laughed at the clown part :) itts a greatt peom! awesome job i am gonna go read your new peoms right now!
XCLover GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 10:21 am
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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This is amazing! The words flow so well together but with a nice rythym. Can't wait to read more of your poems :)
PrincessPea PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 9:32 am
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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please read my other ones and see what you guys think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!tanks
PrincessPea PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 9:32 am
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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tanks much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PrincessPea PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 9:31 am
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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wow everybody seems to love this poem tanks
PrincessPea PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 9:30 am
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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thanks much!!!!!!!
110blackwolf said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 3:03 am
110blackwolf, Unionville, Missouri
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 That just tuches my hart with the sad, happy words of an angel. It's so beautiful.
kaleidoscope_girl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 9:23 pm
kaleidoscope_girl BRONZE, Decherd, Tennessee
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wow! i really love this, it's so true!! plz keep writing!!!
SaMiLoVe97 SILVER said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 5:12 pm
SaMiLoVe97 SILVER, Okawville, Illinois
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If it doesnt break your heart it isnt love, if it doesnt break your heart its not enough. Its when youre breaking down with your insides coming out.Thats when you learn what youre made of.-Switchfoot&lt;3

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Hahaha mahn this is crazy. Ive been wit a boi for two years and he's excactly like who u described. Please keep writin'(:
PrincessPea PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 4:45 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

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ha thats what my freind said too. its like i am in peoples mind but sure ill look at some of yours
fragileblackorchid SILVER said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 4:26 pm
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
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People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk. <br /> -Stephen King :P<br /> The trust of the innocent is the liar&#039;s most useful tool. <br /> -Stephen King<br /> Now that we&#039;re here, <br /> It&#039;s so far away <br /> All the struggle we thought was in vain <br /> All the mistakes, <br /> One life contained <br /> They all finally start to go away <br /> Now that we&#039;re here its so far away <br /> And I feel like I can face the day <br /> I can forgive and I&rsquo;m not ashamed to be the person that I am today

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whoa, its like your in my head haha something like this happened to me this week, please check out my work too?
PrincessPea PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 3:38 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

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sure ill check yours wow alot of ppl are reading this one poem more than my others......maby ill keep writing
lamelola GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 9:26 am
lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
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Good Job! Read My Work?