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He Falls Out Of...

December 19, 2010
By alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Studying the inside of his lids,
He sees the thick cloud of
Dark locks swaying in the night,
And watches her smile shed rays of light.
He smiles at the indulgence his ears meet,
Hearing her voice so soft and sweet.
Feeling her hand reaching out to him –
A warm sensation reaching out to him.
Expecting her soft touch, he’s pushed!
off a cliff to the bottom he’s rushed.
Just as he’s about to hit the bottom,
His eyes fly open,
And he falls out of…
His dreams.

© Heidi S., Marblehead, MA

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alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 8 2011 at 5:13 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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yeaaaah that's true
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 8 2011 at 4:28 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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hey, it works. it might be better than what youre suggesting.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 8 2011 at 9:33 am
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Haha thanks yeah but i'm not sure why i wrote it as a guy having the dream to be honest ha
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 8 2011 at 9:29 am
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Oooooh yeah! Studies say that if you stay in the same position you woke up in from having your dream that if you relax and close your eyes you can continue it but i always forget to do that by the time im in a completely different position!
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 7 2011 at 10:29 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

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i like the sense of "oh, you were in love with her? too bad. its just a dream. oh, well.guess you can go back to your miserable life now." yeah..love that. (no sarcasm)
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 7 2011 at 7:57 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Lmao XD haha. Dang! Don't you hate that? Then you try to go back to sleep and pick it up again but the dream won't come back? Haha.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 7 2011 at 3:29 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Thanks haha yea i had this beautiful dream and i was wearing a gown that Belle wore in beauty and the beast and i was dancing and we were about to kiss and my mom woke me up to tell me she was going to walmart! ahhh i was like momma no! leave me alone! haha
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 7 2011 at 8:33 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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I like this a lot! I've had dreams like this often... Great writing!!