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Irrecoverable

December 14, 2010
By DrewFiero SILVER, Ettrick, Wisconsin
DrewFiero SILVER, Ettrick, Wisconsin
6 articles 4 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
We're all stories in the end.


Fiery flowing in your eyes
Fear taking hold of my heart
What can I do?
All I can do is stare at you
While you hold a shiny piece in your hand
As it flows to me
Hits me with one shot
Slimy, smelly, and red
I knew I was simply dead



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This article has 6 comments.


on Feb. 9 2011 at 6:46 am

Well don't give up hope! Some will respond! :)

 


on Jan. 26 2011 at 5:24 pm
DrewFiero SILVER, Ettrick, Wisconsin
6 articles 4 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
We're all stories in the end.

Thanks, no one else likes this, it seems like I'm giving up hope each day...

on Jan. 26 2011 at 5:17 pm
DrewFiero SILVER, Ettrick, Wisconsin
6 articles 4 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
We're all stories in the end.

Thanks, I think no one else likes it. :'( Ugh, back to the drawing board.

on Jan. 10 2011 at 5:42 pm
I like it :D

on Jan. 7 2011 at 4:42 pm
DrewFiero SILVER, Ettrick, Wisconsin
6 articles 4 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
We're all stories in the end.

and commet if you like this please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank You

M.R.


on Jan. 7 2011 at 4:20 pm
DrewFiero SILVER, Ettrick, Wisconsin
6 articles 4 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
We're all stories in the end.

Por favor (Please), rate this!

Gracias! :D