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So she fell.

March 13, 2011
By starrloves SILVER, Mississauga, Other
starrloves SILVER, Mississauga, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is just an excuse to get hurt, and to hurt."


Her tears felt warm on my arm, and I wrapped my arms around her, as if it would keep her together, or shield her from what she never saw coming.
This one little tear, I didn't catch it. And it fell onto the floor; a dark mark nestling beside our feet. That drop held the weight of her pain.
The nest thing I knew the world ripped open from under us, and I can feel her falling through my arms but no matter how hard I held on I couldn't stop her from slipping.
All I wanted to do was help.
All I could hear in my mind was SAVE HER SAVE HER SAVE HER.
It physically hurt me to know that I couldn't, that it wasn't going to help her as much as I so dearly wished it would.
As the world tore open wider and wider, the unknown blackness looked so deep and unforgiving. I could see that she couldn't hold herself together much longer. So she fell.


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on Apr. 7 2011 at 3:07 pm
starrloves SILVER, Mississauga, Other
7 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is just an excuse to get hurt, and to hurt."

Why thank you, I'm glad you liked it :D

on Apr. 7 2011 at 2:16 pm
Sybrina PLATINUM, Clearwater, Florida
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That's what she said,what the fudge,what the fruit-loops,holy cranberries.OMG TACO'S

this is deep and  so beautiful!