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Sarcasm

March 15, 2011
By Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If You Don&#039;t Fight Back, You&#039;ve Already Lost.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs.&quot;


Sarcasm is me.
The Sarcastic smile,
The Sarcastic expression,
The Sarcastic eye roll,
The Sarcastic remark,
My weapon,
My shield against hurt.

The author's comments:
I use sarcasm everyday. I just decided to write about it.

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on Apr. 15 2011 at 8:39 am
dontforget GOLD, Cortland, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The best things in life are left unseen. That&#039;s why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream.&quot;

you're welcome :]

on Apr. 14 2011 at 9:47 am
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
32 articles 4 photos 178 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If You Don&#039;t Fight Back, You&#039;ve Already Lost.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs.&quot;

i get that a lot :) i am going to try not to use them anymore. :) thanks for the comment!

on Apr. 14 2011 at 8:14 am
dontforget GOLD, Cortland, New York
15 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The best things in life are left unseen. That&#039;s why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream.&quot;

I love the ending line, it's perfect for this poem! I notice in a lot of your poems though that you use commas a lot. They can be a useful tool but deciding to add a few less could really enhance your writing. :] good job!

XCLover GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 8:56 pm
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!&quot; ~Anon<br /> &quot;You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone.&quot; ~Percy Cerutti<br /> &quot;The hug is incomplete without you :3&quot; NinjaMan

I agree with KyotoLove, it feels like there is something more, but I really like how the end of the poem the sharp sound of the word hurt is like a door slamming in the reader's face, as if you are saying "yes, i admit it, i have this weakness. no you can't see it!" it's very teasing to the reader. good work :)

on Apr. 13 2011 at 9:48 am
ofpaintedroses GOLD, Berne, Indiana
12 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;How long is forever?&quot;<br /> &quot;Sometimes just one second.&quot;

i feel like there is more to this poem. that last line "My shield against hurt"

I like that you write with emotiom. I like this one. KEEP IT UP!!(:


Izzy101 said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 9:32 am
Izzy101, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
I am free of all prejudices. I hate everyone equally

I love that poem. It really expresses the true you!

on Apr. 13 2011 at 9:18 am
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
32 articles 4 photos 178 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If You Don&#039;t Fight Back, You&#039;ve Already Lost.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs.&quot;

Thank you. That means a lot. I am glad you liked it. 

JuStMe.DeZZi said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 7:26 am
JuStMe.DeZZi, NA, Other
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Like a true Daria, awesome. Your poems are short and blunt, but incrediblly filled with impact and wit in each word.