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Broken glass

March 19, 2011
By Talia_Silverwolf GOLD, Dayton, Texas
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Talia_Silverwolf GOLD, Dayton, Texas
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Love is like a rose.

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Without a heart
Without a soul
Lying on the the floor
Broken glass
Surrounding me
I'm feeling so cold
So close to death
He calls my name
I call your name
But it's to late
Broken glass
All around me
Why didn't you catch me?

© Sarah H., Lake Mary, FL

The author's comments:
In this poem, the girl was shoved out the window by her boyfriend while they were fighting. It was accidental but he coulldn;t catch her in time.
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This article has 5 comments.

Talia_Silverwolf GOLD said...
on Apr. 17 2011 at 8:02 am
Talia_Silverwolf GOLD, Dayton, Texas
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Love is like a rose.

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Thank you all for the feedback on my work! :)
thezebrasgray PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 16 2011 at 12:33 pm
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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very very good!
derky17 said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 4:31 pm
i love this poem so much, keep writing moore
musicprincess PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 4:21 pm
musicprincess PLATINUM, Braselton, Georgia
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I love this :) I know you intended it to be about a girl who was pushed through a window, but I suppose if you wanted to, it could have even deeper metaphorical meanings too. Either way, this is fabulous!
HaleyLynn101 SILVER said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 3:26 pm
HaleyLynn101 SILVER, Leander, Texas
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I love it. <3

Simple, but very deep.