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The Verge Of Suicide

March 9, 2011
By HurtByLife SILVER, Valdosta, Georgia
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HurtByLife SILVER, Valdosta, Georgia
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I'm not what I have done I'm what I've overcome.

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You saw my pain
You saw the signs
I was on the verge of suicide
You didn't care
You never did
You saw the blood
And watched me die
I gave up with a hell of a fight
You go to her with no pain
I lie cold in the ground soulless
Rotting away to nothing
Gone for all eternity
Tell me love are you happy now

© Hailey J., Lake Oswego, OR

The author's comments:
The guy I love has drifted away from me and it seems like he doesn't care anymore it seems like he would just let me die if i were dieing
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