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April 2, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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On gray days I am depressed
like a misguided ghost
traveling endlessly to find my
family
on a wet winter day

© Anthony P., Gulfport, MS

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It was am assignment a school we had to write a simile poem.I was thinking about the loss of my great grandma when I wrote this.
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musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 2:48 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks i appreciate it
TheSilverLaurel GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 12:31 pm
TheSilverLaurel GOLD, Goole, Other
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it simple, and probably not the first similie i would think of, but it works. 5 stars.
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 2:11 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
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no, i don't think i have
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:23 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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i kinds see it has that little girl with the matches have u ever read that story
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 11:06 am
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I can definately picture this ... I'm a very visual person when it comes to reading and writing ... i see a faint outline of an old hobo like man (dont worry thats not you, it's just what i see when i think ghost and winter) trudging threw snow unable to see a few feet infront of him as a cold snowfilled blast of wind hit him.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 1:38 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thank you i'll look at some of your stuff
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 12:55 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Indeed, another good poem of yours. I like your "Yellow Days."
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:11 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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i know but apart of the assignment was we had to put a place that went with the emotion and color
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2011 at 9:29 pm
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My only criticism for this poem is that the last line 'on a wet winter day' seems out of place. The simile with the ghost is quite sufficient to convey your emotions on a grey day.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2011 at 9:43 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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sweet thanks

 

iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 8:58 pm
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best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.<br /> laugh ur heart out<br /> dance in the rain<br /> cherish the moment<br /> ignore the pain<br /> live, laugh, love<br /> forgive&amp;forget<br /> lifes too short to be<br /> living with regrets

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LOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVEEE IT you are crazy and fun but can have a deep side 
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2011 at 12:27 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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please comment i love to hear feedback positive or negative
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 11 2011 at 6:23 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thankyou i love hearing feedback especially when it's positive
alex198 said...
on May. 11 2011 at 1:32 pm
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I actually like the shorter pieces. I think they're different and you're capable of creating strong images with so few lines which is a great skill and I'm not sure that would translate as well with a longer poem. I really liked this one too :D
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 10 2011 at 11:07 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thank you i know i write really short pieces i'm trying to write longer ones

 

JadedSoul SILVER said...
on May. 10 2011 at 9:07 am
JadedSoul SILVER, Evans, Georgia
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the thoughts behind your poems are very deep.. But maybe you should write bigger verses ..? Or maybe Culminate them or something.. I love what you're writing.. Just wish you could write more.. Hope that helps :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 9 2011 at 10:21 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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anyone plz comment i love to heatr feedback negative or positive