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Don't Leave
May 10, 2011
Caught in that frozen moment.
What shall I do?
I'm desperate for you.
I need you.. I love you
Please, please,
Don't leave me.
© Yisrawayl G., Philadelphia, PA
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ohcaptainmycaptain PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 2:15 pm
I agree we shouldn't have to. I love your work though. You should check out some of mine
xxcoleyxox BRONZE said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 4:39 pm
I love the poem. Although it is short, it is deep and you can really put yourself in the situation. Don't leave me. Almost every reader can relate to this. When you read the first line, the poem could go in many different directions. I love the way you wrote this poem, so short but strong.
Ladylikeinquisition145 GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 2:22 am
I think the simplicity really captures the emotion. But i am curious as to what idea you are trying to get across. I feel slightly lost. But overall, the passion resonates.
ohcaptainmycaptain PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 12:42 pm
I like it! It's the dilemma so many of us face.
AndySixxLover GOLD said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 7:10 pm
Isnt he just the se,xy..est guy youve ever seen??? and the best singer!!
WickedStarcatcher DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 12:45 pm
Short, simple and to the point! Conveys so much emotion well saying so little. Luv it! :D
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