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STAR AND ANGEL

July 8, 2011
By poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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Star and Angel


I thought Saturn was a star, a super star;
But was just fooling myself?
I thought an angel would have golden hair;
But was I really so blind?

A star or an angel could be anything.
A rock, or a tree, or a paper and pen.
A slug, or a fire, or a ball and chain.
A goose or a duckling;
A raven, a fool.....

But no one has been as perfect as you.

© Gracie G., St. Louis, MO

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Here is something I wrote recently, not my favorite for sure, but thought I would share all the same!
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This article has 4 comments.

Silent_Artist SILVER said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 10:09 pm
Silent_Artist SILVER, Selma, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

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&quot;One day I&#039;m gonna run away and never come back and when I come back I&#039;m gonna be the knife master&quot; - Jimmy The Rev Sullivan. Not much of a deep meaning but it makes me laugh.

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I think you forgot to put I in the second line. Besides that, It's a fun, creative poem.
sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 4:12 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
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A negative thinker See&#039;s a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u&#039;ll surely B successful in LIFE.<br /> -Hazrat Ali (A.S)

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It's nice...Y dont you check out some of my work...:)
emanmkhan SILVER said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 8:05 pm
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It's a pretty simple poem, but it makes me think for a while...
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 4:32 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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Very cute! I like how you say that a star and an angel could be anything. Very creative!