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July 18, 2011
By PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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&quot;Stay golden&quot;<br /> - Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

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I want to get lost
Just to fight my way back
To you
To prove
I know
I should have made the walk
Sometime, just so you could hear the pebbles on your window
Again.
But I didn't
Just to make sure
To you
To prove
I am
Not him, and never will be.

© Tim K., La Crosse, WI

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I'd use raisins, just to be safe.
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musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 12:59 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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honestly i don't know i have an idea but then i don't
PaigeStreet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 12:47 am
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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I'd rather know what *you* think it is about :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 12:42 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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what is this about i really enjoyed this
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 2:29 pm
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This poem is great, but the 7th line seems too long compared to the rest of the poem. Maybe you could break it into "Sometime/just so you could hear/the pebbles/on your window"
Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 12:32 pm
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The sentence breaks made a nice touch. Good job!
austenite GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 10:18 am
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I agree, I thought your quote was quite funny :)  I really enjoyed the poem, as well - at first the line breaks threw me off, but I think they work well within the poem.  Overall, reallly nice job!
thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 10:39 am
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hahaha I love your quote! I literally laughed out loud! As for your poem, i really like it. It's interesting, in a good way. Great job!