I miss you | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. I miss you

I miss you

September 25, 2011
By TaylorBreanne PLATINUM, Sandston, Virginia
More by this author
TaylorBreanne PLATINUM, Sandston, Virginia
24 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I write to escape reality. I write to be free. I write because I can lie or tell the truth. I write because I love it. I write because...that's the real me. I am a writer..." -TaylorBreanne

View profile

I miss you when something really good happens,
Because you’re the one I want to share it with,

I miss you when something is troubling me,
Because you’re the one who understands me so well,

I miss you when I laugh and cry,
Because I know you’re the one who makes my laughter grow and my tears disappear,

I miss you all the time,
But I miss you the most when I lie awake at night,
And think of all the wonderful times we spent with each other,

Because those were some of the most memorable times of my life.

© Francesca Y., Robbinsdale, MN

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Alone
By bitty09 SILVER
Claymont, Delaware
bitty09 SILVER, Claymont, Delaware
5 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
La Push
By Renesmeem BRONZE
SeaTac, Washington
Renesmeem BRONZE, SeaTac, Washington
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Different
By sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM
West Jordan, Utah
sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM, West Jordan, Utah
31 articles 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
Poetry
Connected
By emolover95 GOLD
Park City, Utah
emolover95 GOLD, Park City, Utah
13 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened."

View profile
Poetry
Joys of Life
By Daniel Seeley Hicks-Neal BRONZE
Westville, New Jersey
Daniel Seeley Hicks-Neal BRONZE, Westville, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
The Ending
By OurFrost GOLD
Galt, California
OurFrost GOLD, Galt, California
10 articles 1 photo 4 comments
View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 7 comments.

TaylorBreanne PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 29 2011 at 10:59 pm
TaylorBreanne PLATINUM, Sandston, Virginia
24 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I write to escape reality. I write to be free. I write because I can lie or tell the truth. I write because I love it. I write because...that's the real me. I am a writer..." -TaylorBreanne

View profile
Thank You Soooo Much!
Tremendous said...
on Dec. 27 2011 at 4:08 pm
that just.. wow. seemed to reach out and tug violently at my heartstrings. I'm so sorry if you wrote this because you truly felt it. this is incredible.
Helena_Noel BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:39 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
1 article 0 photos 629 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

View profile
He's right, this is a very relatable poem. One of the marks of good literature is that it pulls it reader in by giving it many avenues through which a person can relate, or make even make the unusual and unheard easy to imagine. You did a great job of telling how you felt without making it too 'exclusivly yours'. Five stars!
TaylorBreanne PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 6:42 pm
TaylorBreanne PLATINUM, Sandston, Virginia
24 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I write to escape reality. I write to be free. I write because I can lie or tell the truth. I write because I love it. I write because...that's the real me. I am a writer..." -TaylorBreanne

View profile
Awh, Thanks! I'll think about it
freeflow23 GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 6:11 pm
freeflow23 GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
15 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Saul saw Goliath as too big to kill. David saw he was too big to miss.<br /> W.W.J.D.

View profile
Vey relatable. You should tell people about your writing. You're really good at it.
TaylorBreanne PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 14 2011 at 6:08 am
TaylorBreanne PLATINUM, Sandston, Virginia
24 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I write to escape reality. I write to be free. I write because I can lie or tell the truth. I write because I love it. I write because...that&#039;s the real me. I am a writer...&quot; -TaylorBreanne

View profile
Awh, thanks! I definatly will later today!
BluBliss GOLD said...
on Oct. 13 2011 at 5:01 am
BluBliss GOLD, New York, New York
14 articles 0 photos 161 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bella&#039;s love for Edward was like, &quot;Omg. He&#039;s hot. He&#039;s mine because he sparkles. Now I&#039;ll brood the wholle book while I&#039;m with him.&quot;

View profile
This is pretty much everything that makes up the relationship between friends and family and all that. I love it. I actually want to read more of your work. I think you should publish these things, a collection of poems. To share them with a wider audience.