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Waiting
December 6, 2011
A feeling, like airports
and early morning rain,
and other in-between things,
you know, those things that aren't really there,
they're just in-between,
like the New England coast
to my friends in Germany.
Thats what it feels like, here,
waiting for you.
© Adeline N., Ridgefield, CT
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PaigeStreet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 22 2012 at 1:32 am
Hm. Thank you. That is a very good point- as it really only needs to be said once. I appreciate your feedback, and it's so good to know you liked it!
Mashley310 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 18 2012 at 7:50 pm
I liked it! You got your point across very well, which is hard to do in a short poem (for me anyway). I liked the way you compared your feelings to situations, to make it more vivid and real. The only thing I didn't like was the reptition of "in-between", it seemed kind of redundant. Other than that, good job!
