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December 13, 2011
By K-Siprelle GOLD, Maryville, Tennessee
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Pushing you away
will never be far enough.
These kisses that filled our silences
fall like stars from the now-empty sky.
There was nothing there
to begin with, my love.
So I'll cut theses stitches.
Sever the ties.
Scatter away these remnants of you.
Stop crying.
I can't regret this anymore.
I hate you.
... I love you.

Lend me your heart
so I can break it again.

© Sara D., Aiken, SC

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RejoiceTheySay... PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 2:32 am
RejoiceTheySay... PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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i feel you
Anonymous01 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 4:03 pm
Anonymous01 PLATINUM, Baldwinsvillle, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.&quot;<br /> -Ernest Hemingway

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Wow, this poem is amazing! i love it! great work :]
wenesday1234 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 11:05 am
wenesday1234 BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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best freinds: you cry i cry you laugh i laugh you fight i fight you hurt i hurt you jump off a brige i get in a paddle boat an dsave you

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great poem...i love it, i know how you feel if you hav eever felt this way
Ally1832 SILVER said...
on Dec. 17 2011 at 9:03 am
Ally1832 SILVER, Bark River, Michigan
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Oh wow. I loved this...It speaks to you!

 

MarissaWhitecloud SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 9:56 pm
MarissaWhitecloud SILVER, Oskaloosa, Iowa
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Your words were beautifully strong and great, I loved it.
babysteps GOLD said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 7:57 pm
babysteps GOLD, Wayland, Massachusetts
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I love this especially the ending very...powerful 5 stars!
ALR107 said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 6:40 pm
ALR107, Boise, Idaho
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Great poem, although it was a little strange, I still liked it! :)
taylor1226 said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 12:42 pm
taylor1226, Alexandria, Virginia
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grrs.

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very powerful words full of emotion.I can relate to the feelings in the poem.I'm just getting over my breakup from yesterday and this made me feel better so thanks.:)
Karles_Ivy PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 11:29 am
Karles_Ivy PLATINUM, Sunnyside, Washington
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A little dark at the end, but nevertheless it was truly exceptional.! I agree with Mandiella, thatlasttwo lines were really powerful.!
AngelGraham GOLD said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 9:47 am
AngelGraham GOLD, Nashville, Tennessee
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i love this poem! i recently went though two break up and the first one felt like that. this poem expresses love to a direct point.
Mandiella DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 8:46 am
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
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Wow, this is really good! I love the last two lines. Very powerful!
shelby_kat DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 15 2011 at 11:28 am
shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
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I really really really loved this poem :)