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Not Ready Just Yet...

December 15, 2011
By TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

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Once again,
I find my self standing here,
waiting for you to notice me,
standing at your doorstep,
note in hand.
Explaining that your better off without me.
Your life would be so much easier.
And that I am cruel to drag you with me along for the ride.
I don’t deserve you.
And you don’t deserve me.
Even though,
my life is nothing without you.
I am willing to give my life up
for you.
I’m not going anywhere for now.
And I wish you a long beautiful life, without me in it.
I’m so sorry.
Goodbye, Love.
But, that note still remains in my hand,
and me, on the doorstep.
Because I’m not ready just yet to give you away.
And I step out into the frigid cold.

© Janell E., Dearborn Hts., MI

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Saturn. BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2015 at 11:57 pm
Saturn. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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&quot;The mind is better than the sword&quot;<br /> -Unknown (I&#039;m too lazy to look it up)<br /> &quot;All warfare is based on deception&quot;<br /> -Sun Tzu

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That moment when you realize... You are not ready to let them go away just yet. But it was inevitable. But seriously, this is good, please keep going.
spudbud GOLD said...
on Jun. 18 2012 at 3:39 pm
spudbud GOLD, Newton, Kansas
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&quot;Where is the wise man? Where is the scholar? Have they not been made such a fool in their squalor?<br /> <br /> For they desired a sign and sought for the wise<br /> <br /> When the precursor of life was right in front of their eyes&quot; - Wolves at the Gate

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This fits my situation a little too perfectly. Great work on this piece though!
-Ash- SILVER said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 9:18 pm
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love it!!! 5/5 stars! :)
Zinaidia SILVER said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 5:49 pm
Zinaidia SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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Great imagery! You have a very strong command of language, only suggestion is try to add twists and oddity to it. Or keep it pure from the heart like you did, I only have suggestions. Great job!
Acastillo GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2011 at 2:07 pm
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Wow this is very sad but I like it