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My Foe

February 11, 2012
By briannalee BRONZE, Berne, Indiana
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briannalee BRONZE, Berne, Indiana
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You left me alone, so lost, with no tone.
You laughed as i cried.
when you walked away,
I asked myself why?
Why did you leave me so dead inside?
All the times you hurt me,
I simply stepped aside.
Now you're gone.
And i guess i was wrong,
you're not the man i thought you were.
It seems you're only barely a boy,
one who is rotten to the bone and deprived of all joy.

I now understand why you had to go.
Now, is just too late, and you are forever my foe.

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

The author's comments:
we started doing a section on poetry at school and things just started coming to me out of nowhere. i would be sitting in class and start thinking about something and i would rush to grab my notebook and wrote every thing i was thinking, onto a piece of paper.
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