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This is not a poem its my life

March 19, 2012
By AnandhuKrishna BRONZE, Quilon, Other
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Do something slightly different from the ordinary.Do it big.It will be the new trend.Create innovation...Make new<br /> --simply me saying

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My life...its an unfinished poem
imperfect picture ...an ugly truth
I am writing but my pen is out of ink
I am painting but my canvas is dirty
i cant sing ......my throat is sore
I can't see colours....my eyes are all red
Salt storm of hardships weakening my eyes
Still strong in the hope a sweet scented breeze.
Will it come????
I cannot live perfect...how much I try
I love life
that much I lose life
that much God hate me
Lift these veils
Too late i think
Its time to leave or time to reach
I'm going
for the search of immortality
immortality of soul
Yes behind death...longing to reach there....

© Brian M., Fishers, IN

The author's comments:
This is a feelote.Feelote is a new literature style that i have formulated or found or whatever..Its plain feelings written .Its not a poem nor a story but a blend.No one can say this is unrealistic because these are the exact thoughts i had for 5 minitues. Feelings literature that is feelote...
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on Oct. 18 2012 at 9:35 am
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I like it. It's different.
AnandhuKrishna BRONZE said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 1:59 pm
AnandhuKrishna BRONZE, Quilon, Other
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Do something slightly different from the ordinary.Do it big.It will be the new trend.Create innovation...Make new<br /> --simply me saying

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