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Lost, Lonely, and Left!

December 30, 2012
By Broken_Lover PLATINUM, Theodore, Alabama
Broken_Lover PLATINUM, Theodore, Alabama
22 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
No man is worth your tears,and the one who is will never make you cry.


I lay here in the silence, and let my mind wonder. 
I need proper guidance, but all I do is ponder.
Where have the years gone, and when all weren't so cruel?
The world is now a con, but not all are in a duel.

Everyone has me convinced, and no one stands by me.
Next I'll be in Providence, then maybe everyone will see.
I am lost and confused, but no one seems to care.
Lately I've been verbally abused, that is something I cannot bare.

Harsh words have been thrown, and hopes and dreams shattered.
My heart not fully sewn, because it has been beaten and battered.
The hopes of being thin, and the dreams of becoming a star.
I feel as if I've been poked by a pin, and left with a massive scar.

No one understands, and they won't even try.
Maybe I need their hands, but away from them I'll have to be pried.
Look around what do you see, a lot of hurt and a lot of pain.
These silent tears have yet to be seen, only because I have nothing left to gain.



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on Jan. 2 2013 at 7:27 pm
monkeyluvs2rite, Falls Church, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You must be the change you want to see in the world&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -----Mahatma Gandhi

It's a very common topic but interesting as well. I love the way you hint at what the problem is but don't completely give it away. Keep writing!

on Jan. 2 2013 at 2:34 pm
theatregirl PLATINUM, Lathrup Village, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;To thine own self be true,&quot; -from Hamlet, a play by Shakespeare.<br /> &quot;I have sworn on the altar of god eternal hostility against all forms of tyranny over the mind of man.&quot; - Thomas Jefferson

I like poem but it Could be better. You can go beyond the substandard cliche everyone right about such ad "heart been beaten and battered". Also explain. The story behind this a bit clearer . Keep writing !

kmcn33 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 2 2013 at 8:26 am
kmcn33 BRONZE, Needham, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
I was much too far out all my life / And not waving but drowning

This was so powerful....