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Golden Sweat

January 13, 2013
By ZhaNae BRONZE, Duncanville, Texas
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ZhaNae BRONZE, Duncanville, Texas
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Hurt people, hurt people.

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Dull eyes: golden sweat.
I have tried, and I've found my threat
Blue veins because my loss of breath
Starving: from Striving for success.
I have spotted a sight of black and gray
Known to men? I cannot say
I have found out which is true
Trying to hard can lead us bruised.

© Morgan H., Marblehead, MA

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Trying to hard to succeed is worthless when it's selfish.
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