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Learning to Fly

January 22, 2013
By KennaLynn14 BRONZE, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
KennaLynn14 BRONZE, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
One day when the world stops turning, you will come face to face with your own arch enemy, yourself!


I feel the need to fly away,
But it seems somethings making me stay.
My wings outstretched,
And ready to fly,
But I can't break free,
I cant even try.
My heart longs to be free,
From this caged and harsh world,
But i cant get away from the emotions,
For i cannot see.
My heart wants to feel loved,
Is that so much to ask?
I want to leave, I want to fly,
I need that chance,
Just please,
Let me try.


The author's comments:
This piece describes the way that i feel in this world. I am not a very talkative person, so I am usually looked down on. So this poem expresses how I just want to let go, and spread my wings and fly!

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on May. 22 2013 at 8:37 am
KennaLynn14 BRONZE, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
One day when the world stops turning, you will come face to face with your own arch enemy, yourself!

That means alot to me, thank you!

on May. 22 2013 at 8:36 am
KennaLynn14 BRONZE, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
One day when the world stops turning, you will come face to face with your own arch enemy, yourself!

Thank you, and I agree! I am a huge believer in God, and I believe that he is the answer when it comes to times of struggle and times of joy! Thanks again for your comment:)

on May. 22 2013 at 8:35 am
KennaLynn14 BRONZE, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
One day when the world stops turning, you will come face to face with your own arch enemy, yourself!

Thank you I really appreciate your kind comment:)

on May. 22 2013 at 8:35 am
KennaLynn14 BRONZE, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
One day when the world stops turning, you will come face to face with your own arch enemy, yourself!

Thank you so much!  

on May. 22 2013 at 8:34 am
KennaLynn14 BRONZE, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
One day when the world stops turning, you will come face to face with your own arch enemy, yourself!

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate your comment:) And Im glad to see that I am not alone in feeling this way!  

on Jan. 27 2013 at 1:21 pm
Miss.Macy BRONZE, Beaver Falls, Pennsylvania
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I feel just like that. Great job! I love it!! :D

on Jan. 27 2013 at 9:20 am
GreekGoddess BRONZE, Andover, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"The unprepared rebel dies in the fire."<br /> ~unknown

Aw man, I feel like that a lot. I love it, good writing, keep it up.

on Jan. 26 2013 at 5:19 pm
Ashers101 DIAMOND, Lebanon, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t want to be like everyone else, I want to be me. I won&#039;t walk with all of you on the ground because I can fly. -My own quote

That's how I feel. I love this poem!! :)

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on Jan. 26 2013 at 7:40 am
Dea817, Jakarta, Other
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amazyn! iam a quiet person too :( thanks your poem inspire me

on Jan. 26 2013 at 6:14 am
Roe-Daniels BRONZE, >>>>>>>, Other
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Very, very sweet

on Jan. 25 2013 at 9:17 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

Great poem, I know exactly what you mean. But you are beautiful the way you are. Some people are just quiet. God bless you:)

on Jan. 25 2013 at 5:34 pm
Brockili123 BRONZE, Loves Park, Illinois
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The metaphor usage in this poem is outstanding. I love this poem!

on Jan. 25 2013 at 3:47 pm
absconditus BRONZE, Monroe, North Carolina
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Sometimes I feel like that too, but I feel trapped with my words. I am a very talkative person. I know that the best way to be free is loving and obeying God. If you pray sincerly, he will help you. I know that he hears every prayer. He loves you. I enjoyed your poem. Good job.