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Pinky's Poem

January 28, 2013
By Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
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Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. <br /> Lao Tzu

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Teeth white as snow
lips red as blood
dark hazel eyes bearing
down on my rosy cheeks
making me wish I was his
I try not to look but it is hard not to stare knowing he is always there
I wish to take his hand and intertwine them with my own
just thinking of this makes me shake to my bones
So i quickly look down
he places his ice cold hand on my warm forehead
making me quiver
he quickly retracts
and I can't help but laugh
a crocked grin paints his face
leaving an everlasting mark
on my heart

© Gabrielle A., Pensacola, FL

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Soccer23 GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2013 at 11:37 am
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
11 articles 11 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. <br /> Lao Tzu

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Thank you! :) 
Mckay ELITE said...
on Mar. 16 2013 at 1:26 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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I agree with redhairCat: the imagery used is lovely. Woncerful work; I love the image too that you used.
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 25 2013 at 3:18 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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&quot;I can do anything!&quot;

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Great imagery! So good! Keep writing!
Soccer23 GOLD said...
on Feb. 17 2013 at 11:27 pm
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
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Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. <br /> Lao Tzu

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Thank you :)
Mollybug16 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 15 2013 at 10:21 pm
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wow I love this poem... It is perfectly worded