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Good vs Evil
February 19, 2013
In all of us,there is a war. A war of Good vs Evil. I can feel it destroying me slowly. For now, Good prevails, but I can FEEL THE EVIL, rising, rising, slowly rising. And one dark night, very soon indeed, when the steely fangs of Evil are sharpened, poised, and ready to strike, oh yes, Evil will rise, and WE will have to choose. And we may regret that choice.
© Kimber E., Yorktown, VA
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RoyalCorona SILVER said...
on Sep. 29 2013 at 2:35 pm
This was great! I agree with all the things that LaChouette says. This was a great idea and though it needs some work, it is still pretty good! Nice job!
LaChouette GOLD said...
on Sep. 25 2013 at 7:58 pm
Hey gogirl123! I like the meaning behind your poem. I think there are some parts where you can separate the sentences so that certain lines stick out more than others and end up resonating with the reader more. For lines such as 'FEEL THE EVIL,' you may not need to capitalize those words to make them stand out to the reader. Putting words like that separately can create emphasis on their own. (If you prefer to capitalize, that's fine too). I think it will help. As for grammar and spelling, both are pretty good. Nice Job! (If anything I said doesn't make sense, just ask me to clarify. I'm not the greatest at explaining things..)