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The Autumn Boy

May 1, 2013
By vanessarose BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
vanessarose BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
“Most people don't recognize opportunity when it comes, because it's usually dressed in overalls and looks a lot like work”  -Thomas Edison


There he lays, here I stand.
Silently nearing,
I take his hand as if it’s a fragile flower.
Fading, my son is, fading
Like the Autumn fades into the deathly Winter.
His breaths are narrowing.
I’m left defenseless,
As Death claims my son.
My son, mine alone.
And like the Autumn,
He fades away.


The author's comments:
I wrote this for English class

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on May. 5 2013 at 6:37 pm
vanessarose BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Most people don't recognize opportunity when it comes, because it's usually dressed in overalls and looks a lot like work”  -Thomas Edison

Thank you soooo much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

on May. 5 2013 at 12:47 pm
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"

I Agree, so much emotion.

on May. 5 2013 at 8:05 am
hiddenprincess GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
I would rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I&#039;m not.<br /> I am a dreamer and no one will ever take that away from me.<br /> People may say that you will be nothing but you may say Watch me!

That was beautiful. In so few words you put a lot of emotion in it. Keep writing!

NOVA232 SILVER said...
on May. 4 2013 at 9:51 pm
NOVA232 SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
nothing is ever as it seems

That was tragically beautiful.