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Lonely, Forgotten Friend

April 30, 2013
By gossamergirl GOLD, Nowhere, New Hampshire
gossamergirl GOLD, Nowhere, New Hampshire
15 articles 1 photo 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." ~ Moulin Rouge


“What is this that I have found?”
Said the girl whose college bound.
It is the doll that she once knew
Dressed in pink and green and blue
They used to play all day and night,
She’d cry to her when parents fight
Now into the box she goes
Up to the attic with too small clothes

The doll is overjoyed when
She sees the girl, her old friend
She remembers all the things they did
Till underneath the bed she slid
That fateful day when the boy came home
And the doll had to sleep alone
And now the doll’s alone once more
In a box in the attic for another score


The author's comments:
I wrote this for my English class and I'm thinking about submitting it to my school's creative writing magazine. What do you think of it? let me know in the Comments please

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HammadWaseem said...
on May. 22 2013 at 5:07 pm
HammadWaseem, Lahore, Other
0 articles 5 photos 283 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be proud of who you are.<br /> -Eminem<br /> <br /> You can&#039;t see me<br /> -John Cena<br /> <br /> Ooh, somebody stop me!<br /> -Mask

wow its amazing! good job! :)

on May. 22 2013 at 3:42 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness&quot;

I really like it i like the flow and its just simple and great so good job