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May 18, 2013
By liberalartist GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
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liberalartist GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
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Poeta nasicur, non fit. (a poet is born, not made)

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Abysmal king
King of darkness
Prisoner of light.
He steps lightly,
fearing he will be heard
and his terrestrial kingdom
filled with light.

© Sarah M., Blairsville, PA

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liberalartist GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2013 at 6:13 pm
liberalartist GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
14 articles 2 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poeta nasicur, non fit. (a poet is born, not made)

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thank you :3  
Fallen_ PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 5 2013 at 6:10 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

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" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

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Your wordchoice is perfection in a bottle it has a errie lovly feel its just amazing keep it up.
liberalartist GOLD said...
on Jun. 4 2013 at 7:15 pm
liberalartist GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
14 articles 2 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poeta nasicur, non fit. (a poet is born, not made)

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thank you :3
LittleLadybird GOLD said...
on Jun. 4 2013 at 7:10 pm
LittleLadybird GOLD, Carrickfergus, Other
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To be nobody but yourself in a world that is trying it's hardest every night and day to change you into everyone else is to fight the hardest battle a human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

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The language is beautiful, love the image of the king of darkness who is the prisoner of light! :D very eerie and lovely :)
liberalartist GOLD said...
on May. 31 2013 at 9:50 am
liberalartist GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
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Poeta nasicur, non fit. (a poet is born, not made)

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i was bored during my language arts class, and wrote it. the guy doesnt want to be discovered
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on May. 30 2013 at 5:46 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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I absolutely loved this: the idea and the execution. Very well written. Only...i don't really understand the ending. Explain? :P