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He became my world

June 13, 2013
By hayhaywhaley GOLD, Houston, Texas
hayhaywhaley GOLD, Houston, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"How could any step away from you ever be in the right direction?"


I met a boy once who morphed my world,
He took my hands and led me through the mysteries of the land,
I saw beauty,
I saw bliss,
I saw hurt, sorrow, and anguish
But most of all I saw love
And though I can't touch him I can imagine how it must feel to be held with such passion,
But I can only admire from afar, captivated in thoughts of dreams and great wishes,
Come to me my love and we'll be consummated
Forever
Connected
And bound by affections.


The author's comments:
I fell in love with a guy who lives in another state and he's my muse. The one who got me to start writing again.

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on Jun. 15 2013 at 1:58 pm
hayhaywhaley GOLD, Houston, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"How could any step away from you ever be in the right direction?"

Thanks for the idea! I only write what flows from my heart, I can't force anything out. So what pops into my head is what I write on paper. But you have just inspired me to write a poem about him beings muse. Thank you so much.(:

asofnow GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2013 at 1:08 pm
asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing gold can stay ~ Robert Frost

I like how he keeps you writing. It would be cool if you added that to your piece that way it would sound bettter. I love the line about 'admiring from afar' because when people say I stalk people that's my comeback.... lols, I don't really stalk people... that much. But yeah. I like this 5 stars :)

on Jun. 14 2013 at 5:35 pm
hayhaywhaley GOLD, Houston, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"How could any step away from you ever be in the right direction?"

Thank you so much! I love to hear it when people can relate (:

on Jun. 14 2013 at 2:45 pm
Solumicecast GOLD, Paden City, West Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;That&rsquo;s us,&rdquo; he said. &ldquo;Those five nuts right there.&rdquo; <br /> Which one is me?&rdquo; I asked. <br /> The little deformed one,&rdquo; Zoe suggested. <br /> Oh, shut up.&rdquo; <br /> ― Rick Riordan, The Titan&#039;s Curse

Good job I loved this poem

on Jun. 14 2013 at 2:42 pm
Solumicecast GOLD, Paden City, West Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;That&rsquo;s us,&rdquo; he said. &ldquo;Those five nuts right there.&rdquo; <br /> Which one is me?&rdquo; I asked. <br /> The little deformed one,&rdquo; Zoe suggested. <br /> Oh, shut up.&rdquo; <br /> ― Rick Riordan, The Titan&#039;s Curse

I like your poem. I have a guy I like and he never stops talking about me. It just nice to know he cares

on Jun. 14 2013 at 11:32 am
hayhaywhaley GOLD, Houston, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;How could any step away from you ever be in the right direction?&quot;

I'm so glad you can relate! Thank you

on Jun. 13 2013 at 10:44 pm
Dancergirl224 GOLD, Allen, Texas
15 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
I Love You Now and Forever &lt;3<br /> I am always by your side.... I&#039;m in your heart<br /> you should be optimisticly pestimestic

I LOVE THIS!!!! I totally understand how you feel, I feel the exact same way for a guy that i know who went into the military. Amazing job writing this poem :)