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Just Call

June 14, 2013
By Csquared GOLD, Lexington, Massachusetts
Csquared GOLD, Lexington, Massachusetts
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The constant recurrence
Of your emails
In my inbox.
You attempt to contact me
But don’t you understand.
If you wish to reach me,
Just call.

I prefer the sound of your voice,
To the words on the screen.
Yet, you don’t understand.
Just call.

When I don’t answer the emails,
You attempt to text.
My portable phone vibrates
And a message appears
In a language I don’t understand.
“I bet u r busy, so I’ll txt u l8r. Ttyl!”
“Where r u? R u on a trip? Answer my txts and emails Gran”
Then
My portable phone bill
Is $20.
A fortune.
So please
Just call.

Where has my caring granddaughter gone?
She is a slave to technology.
As a young girl
She loved books.
Now
She loves her ipad.
She once wrote me handwritten notes,
And sent them to me
Using stamps, an envelope, and the post office.
She would then
call me, and ask if I got her letter.
I miss that girl.
And the only way she will come back to me,
Is if she would
Just call.


The author's comments:
Please post any comment that you have. I am interested to see what you think. I just wrote it for fun. I am experimenting with perspectives. :-) Hope you like it!

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Csquared GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2013 at 11:05 am
Csquared GOLD, Lexington, Massachusetts
10 articles 0 photos 37 comments
Thank you! It was fun to write from the perspective of an old person. :-)

on Jul. 22 2013 at 11:17 pm
Carly_Elizabeth PLATINUM, Othello, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;And above all, watch with glittering eyes the whole world around you because the greatest secrets are always hidden in the most unlikely places. Those who don&#039;t believe in magic will never find it.&quot; <br /> Roald Dahl

I like this poem. Even  though I'm not close with my grandmother I think you portrayed it perfectly how grandmothers think. And I agree with ClaireWritesStuff that "just call" is perfect haha. 

Csquared GOLD said...
on Jul. 14 2013 at 9:03 pm
Csquared GOLD, Lexington, Massachusetts
10 articles 0 photos 37 comments
Thank you! My grandmother has actually told me to stop emailing her, and "just call" so the title got a little inspiration from her.

on Jul. 14 2013 at 7:37 am
ClaireWritesStuff BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;My thoughts are stars I cannot fathom into constellations.&quot; - John Green.

I love the motif of the words 'just call'. They're very powerful and I was able to feel sympathy towards the grandmother, as it really accentuates the desire she has for the girl to 'just call'. The message behind this piece is brilliant and it was well written! Well done :)