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June 28, 2013
By DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Summer

Summer, I love that word
And all the memories it brings to mind
The lovely days not yet blurred
By time

Summer is a break from everything
No school till fall
And many sunny days,
I love it all

Summer, so golden and sweet
It means so much to me
And at the end I feel complete
I feel so fancy free

© Richard F., League City, TX

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I wrote this poem because i love summer, and i want everyone to know just how much it means to me.
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DawnieRae BRONZE said...
on Jan. 11 2014 at 3:17 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Sorry i couldn't get back to you sooner! Thank you! every comment means so much! 
Magik1234 SILVER said...
on Dec. 20 2013 at 8:10 pm
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I love the rhytmn and the way this poem flows. You should submit more poems.
DawnieRae BRONZE said...
on Sep. 30 2013 at 12:17 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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thank you soo much! I'm so glad other peope like my work! 
RoyalCorona SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2013 at 5:52 pm
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This poem was nicely written and has a sort of rthymn to it that floats through the words! Great job!
DawnieRae BRONZE said...
on Aug. 28 2013 at 4:02 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thank you McKay! I really enjoy reading everyones feedback! 
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on Aug. 27 2013 at 3:49 pm
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I like the style of it. And how you express what qualities make this season so enjoyable for you. Nicely written.
DawnieRae BRONZE said...
on Aug. 22 2013 at 6:28 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thanks sooooooo much!! That means a lot! Have a nice day!!
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on Aug. 22 2013 at 5:55 pm
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Great job! Simplistic and elegant :D Keep on writing!
DawnieRae BRONZE said...
on Aug. 17 2013 at 9:00 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thank you soo much! I love reading what other people think of my work. It really encourages me to write more.
Helena_Noel BRONZE said...
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Ha! This is a good one! I like the unique lenths of the lines. For some weird reason, I can only rhyme when in meter, but the rhythem these lines have are closer to the way a person talks. It feels human. Plus, I LOVE the subject of summer and memories. Rockin' job, Dawnie!
DawnieRae BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 6:18 am
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thanks! I will definetly be reading your poem!!
freeperson DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 28 2013 at 11:39 am
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i think this is very cool. i'd like to look at my poem goodbye if u dont mind :)    
DawnieRae BRONZE said...
on Jul. 24 2013 at 5:40 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thanks I am glad you liked it!!!! :) :)
Angel1932 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2013 at 6:32 pm
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I loove summer too, and this poem most definitely out a meaning to summer, great job!
DawnieRae BRONZE said...
on Jul. 22 2013 at 7:24 am
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thank you so much!
DawnieRae BRONZE said...
on Jul. 22 2013 at 7:23 am
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thank you! I will keep on writing!
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on Jul. 21 2013 at 5:26 pm
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I liked the words you used to describe summer, "golden and sweet." And the ryming too. My favorite was, "lovely days not yet blurred by time." It is a perfect description of summer. Keep writing more!
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 21 2013 at 1:28 pm
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I really like this poem. :) It is so happy and carefree, which totally reminds me of summer! ^.^
sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 21 2013 at 9:22 am
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Of course! And just keep writing stuff like this and the comments and ratings will just keep piling up!!
DawnieRae BRONZE said...
on Jul. 21 2013 at 6:47 am
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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thank you so much! I will make sure i read your articles too.