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July 10, 2013
By Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened. <br /> - Thomas Jefferson

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i was having a fine ole day
till i saw you and you saw me too
and our eyes licked together
and we were feeling something
special something new
i saw it in your eyes
that crinkle the devious you
and we walked down together
making laughing jokes
avoiding scary blokes
and in the coffee shop
you took my hand
and my breath caught
we were electric
fire and ice
crackling together
but i knew it couldn't last forever
our eyes lock together
to this very day
but you and i both know
it can't ever be the same.

© Ashley B., Potomac, MD

The author's comments:
this connection was the most real one ive ever felt. for those hopeless romantics out there. it does exit but appreciate it when you find it because it could disappear any second, You never know.
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Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 31 2013 at 11:09 am
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
65 articles 0 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened. <br /> - Thomas Jefferson

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thankyou. and yes i did, haha  
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 3:27 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If it weren&rsquo;t for the coffee, I&rsquo;d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.&rdquo; &ndash;David Letterman

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I love it, but I think you meant to say "clicked together," not "licked together" in the third line :D Otherwise, awesome job (I adore the "avoiding scary blokes" line)!
Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 22 2013 at 5:45 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
65 articles 0 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened. <br /> - Thomas Jefferson

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thankyou :)
Melancholy.Musings.of.a.Silly.Girl. PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2013 at 1:22 pm
Melancholy.Musings.of.a.Silly.Girl. PLATINUM, Islamabad, Other
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&quot;I tell you that there are terrible temptations that it requires strength, strength and courage, to yeild to.&quot;- Oscar Wilde, An Ideal Husband.

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Blown away here. <3
Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 11 2013 at 4:32 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened. <br /> - Thomas Jefferson

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thankyou, this is one of my favs.  
sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 11 2013 at 1:18 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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love this! my favorite line was the one about fire and ice. Beautiful!!!