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From Ashes To Flames

July 29, 2013
By Lyinheart SILVER, Harrisonburg, Virginia
Lyinheart SILVER, Harrisonburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Failing isn't just for failures, it's for everybody. Failures just have more experience." - Dan Smith


I feel it staring down on me.

That eye in the heavens.

Burning a hole through me.

I try to put the ashes back in

but they slip

through my fingertips.

Ablaze from the embers.

It feels good to be warm again.

I can see its disappointment.

Sad that I've been

stitching myself together

for so long

to keep the pieces together.

I tried to do it by myself

but I'm no surgeon.

But that doesn't make me human,

it makes me Frankenstein's monster.

 

Falling apart is human.

 

And that's what I should have done.

I didn't think you could take my breaks.

But you took my brokenness

and made me whole again.

I grabbed your hand

and the fire that rekindled in my soul

mixed with yours.

I looked up into the heavens

to thank that eye.

For helping me realize my humanity.

But all it gave was a wink then vanished.

I searched for it but was blinded

by the glow of our fire.

I'll never forget what that eye did for me.

Igniting the spark of humanity within my soul.



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on Jul. 31 2013 at 12:35 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

I think this is similar to your other poem. I like it :) "But that doesn't make me human, it makes me Frankenstein's monster. Falling apart is human. And that's what I should have done." --brilliant. You're all about accepting flaws and insecurities, huh? Like, our weaknesses make us strong. I really enjoy reading your works, keep up the good job. 5/5 stars! :D