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Falling apart

September 27, 2013
By Scarlett_the_pegacorn BRONZE, Niceville, Florida
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Scarlett_the_pegacorn BRONZE, Niceville, Florida
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Our love was held together by a thread.
I held on but you let go instead.

© Ali C., Hyannisport, MA

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This is actually a small excerpt from a song I wrote; This was the best part.
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Scarlett_the_pegacorn BRONZE said...
on Feb. 8 2014 at 2:29 pm
Scarlett_the_pegacorn BRONZE, Niceville, Florida
4 articles 24 photos 136 comments

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Eclipse as in...Twilight? If so, yuck. >.< Lol But thx. 
quoter said...
on Oct. 16 2013 at 6:53 pm
quoter, Glenview, Illinois
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&quot;If who I am is what I have and what I have is lost, then who am I?&quot;

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AWESOME!!! reminds me of the book cover of eclipse...
Mckay ELITE said...
on Sep. 30 2013 at 4:35 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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Tell me about it. I can relate with this one, bridezilla, on so many levels. Love it love it love it! The simplicity of it makes it perfecto! Awesome-sauce. 
tiahmarie16 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 30 2013 at 11:52 am
tiahmarie16 BRONZE, Dexter, Missouri
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This is really good(; I have had this happen to me before! Keep up the good work