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Humanities MAG
November 13, 2008
Seventh hour
he dances
around my
question, writing trueLOVE
on my legs with a
stolen
purple
Sharpie
He’s smiling
only smiling
so maybe I’ll smile back
and maybe get up
and leave
© Danielle L., League City, TX
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PhoenixCrossing GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 4:34 pm
I really enjoy this, and it especially appeals to my eye because it's short. Comment my work? Thanks :)
TolkienLewisWhitman BRONZE said...
on May. 19 2011 at 7:23 pm
This is a piece worth it's recognition. In a short moment, you manage to put the point across clearly. Many poets can claim fame for that ability, you know.
BitterSweet1993 SILVER said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 9:04 pm
Beautiful. Short. Sweet. Powerful. Leaves much to the imagining mind. And makes me want more. Your writing style is appealing to me. :)
bluegirl440 DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 9:30 am
I wonder what the question was....
olympian-queen said...
on Jun. 1 2010 at 7:06 pm
i don't think that you are too young because i didn't get it either.. i didn't see how it tied in so....yea!
TheSummoningFreak PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 1 2010 at 4:20 pm
i like it. but yeah the whole sharpie thing??
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 4:26 pm
wow i thought that was great but would you mind explaining the sharpie part to me-I'd really like to know!!!
Kay4theRoses said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 9:16 am
it was cool how you wrote about a crush(lack of a better word) without being gushy and you got across how you felt about it without actually writing out the emotion.
(to everyone)-
check out my stuff and comment.
would appreciate the constructive critisim.
(to everyone)-
check out my stuff and comment.
would appreciate the constructive critisim.
elliewatermellon said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 7:46 am
I loved the last line! It proved that you are a good writer!
sedaracapri BRONZE said...
on Feb. 11 2010 at 3:38 pm
I'm sorry, maybe I'm too young to understand the meaning of this poem. Anyone willing to explain it to me?
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