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My Beloved

April 10, 2014
By tzuzan BRONZE, Thrissur, Other
tzuzan BRONZE, Thrissur, Other
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i have fallen in love
my heart soars with my beloved
a sight of him fills my heart like its blood
his presence fills my lungs with air
his voice is the sweetest music my ears could hear
the thoughtof him awakens every cell of my body
a day without him is like a day without the sun
he is an element which keeps me alive
we are meant to be together like the adjacent flowers in a garland
sharing the sweet scent of life
your hand rests upon mine like it was meant to be
like the correct pieces of a puzzle
we are inseparable
even when we lie in two separate coffins
my heart yearns to be with yours


The author's comments:
Its my view towards love

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TheUniverse said...
on Apr. 16 2014 at 10:56 am
TheUniverse, Everywhere,, Other
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Exercise to stimulate, not to annihilate. The world wasn't formed in a day, and neither were we. Set small goals and build upon them.

Its very good!!!  A simplistic love note is that's very well written can go places....  Work on the spelling of some words and it'll be perfect!!!!  Keep up the great writing!!!!!!

Aasha.. BRONZE said...
on Apr. 16 2014 at 5:02 am
Aasha.. BRONZE, Kathmandu, Other
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Life is beautiful.

GREAT WORK..... Simple but heart touching!!

on Apr. 15 2014 at 1:36 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
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that is an amazing poem. ik exactly how you feel, keep up the great work. :)

on Apr. 15 2014 at 1:40 am
TheOceansBlackBird SILVER, Richmond, California
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One persons craziness is another persons reality<br /> -Tim Burton<br /> <br /> and then there&#039;s this one<br /> ╭&cap;╮(︶︿︶)╭&cap;╮

I really enjoyed this. Those last few words were especially beautiful and touching. Keep up the good work :)

tzuzan BRONZE said...
on Apr. 15 2014 at 1:21 am
tzuzan BRONZE, Thrissur, Other
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Thanks a lot ! being from a non english speaking country, this is an honour for me.

on Apr. 15 2014 at 12:50 am
GhostMatrix SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
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Live Each Day To The Fullest. -Quote From Somewhere Else-<br /> <br /> I&#039;m Whatever You Want Me To Be - My Quote -

That was Beautiful.   I was feeling all types of emotions.     Good Work.   Keep Writing.