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My Love
April 14, 2014
My love, why you?
I deserve this death,
this pain belongs to me.
I did wrong.
I broke the rules,
and now it's time to pay.
I am guilty as charged.
The penalty for my sin
is death.
My love, what are you doing?
You are innocent!
Never have you done a wrong.
Your blood soaks the ground,
where mine should be.
I'll make up for it with tears.
My love, where are you going?
For I want to be there.
Let me die with you!
You died for me.
You set me free.
You are my life.
My love, is that you?
You are alive!
My love is alive!
© Jonathan C., Tracy, CA
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This article has 9 comments.
Angelique_h GOLD said...
on Oct. 24 2014 at 5:48 pm
This is amazing! It shows the truly emotional and sad perspective of a christian that most people just don't understand! You clearly conveyed your topic and did so in a way that almost resolved me to tears. This is a very rare talent. Excellent Work!
Ariel_Fluffyy SILVER said...
on Sep. 14 2014 at 3:00 pm
This is a truly beautiful piece! <3
sullivano17 PLATINUM said...
on May. 31 2014 at 11:36 pm
I like the way you hinted at the sacrifices for love. a little heavy on the exclamation points, but i like it overall(:
WinterRose76 SILVER said...
on May. 27 2014 at 4:15 pm
Beautifully written! I love it :)
