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Things fall apart

September 12, 2014
By chezbona SILVER, Accra, Other
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chezbona SILVER, Accra, Other
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your wildest imagination is just the beginning,make the sky your starting point.<br /> To a better world,<br /> Chez bona.

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In times when you would hold me thight
Though we were two birds on a tree,
So high when i fret you spread your wings to cover me
Remember the first time we met
When I saw you and knew you were the one
When you found out I had fallen for you
You carried me around pretending to be my ride
You stuck chocolate on my nose
Made me blush and fall more deep in something I always doubted
Gone are the days when thing fall apart,
Now we are together,I hope we never depart.

© Yaniris M., Boston, MA

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chezbona SILVER said...
on Feb. 15 2015 at 6:11 pm
chezbona SILVER, Accra, Other
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your wildest imagination is just the beginning,make the sky your starting point.<br /> To a better world,<br /> Chez bona.

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Ouch that hurt a bit
Kaydie PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 15 2015 at 8:46 am
Kaydie PLATINUM, Uyo, Other
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&quot;There are all these ideas about what is perfect and what is beautifu land what is smart,but the most appealing thing is,that which is me is nobody else&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Jennifer Lopez

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but I'll definitely come back to read your work..bye for now
Kaydie PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 15 2015 at 8:45 am
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not like I read your article,,just to let u know I'm still alive and cool...just school stress,that's all...but I don't remember you,I only remember your name....I don't even remember if you are male or female..get back to me plzzz
chezbona SILVER said...
on Oct. 11 2014 at 2:27 pm
chezbona SILVER, Accra, Other
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your wildest imagination is just the beginning,make the sky your starting point.<br /> To a better world,<br /> Chez bona.

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most definitely
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on Oct. 10 2014 at 9:30 pm
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Beautiful!
chezbona SILVER said...
on Sep. 28 2014 at 10:41 am
chezbona SILVER, Accra, Other
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your wildest imagination is just the beginning,make the sky your starting point.<br /> To a better world,<br /> Chez bona.

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Anytime Emy
chezbona SILVER said...
on Sep. 28 2014 at 10:41 am
chezbona SILVER, Accra, Other
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your wildest imagination is just the beginning,make the sky your starting point.<br /> To a better world,<br /> Chez bona.

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Most definitely,would never stop writin
chezbona SILVER said...
on Sep. 28 2014 at 10:39 am
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your wildest imagination is just the beginning,make the sky your starting point.<br /> To a better world,<br /> Chez bona.

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I also like the last lines
chezbona SILVER said...
on Sep. 28 2014 at 10:38 am
chezbona SILVER, Accra, Other
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your wildest imagination is just the beginning,make the sky your starting point.<br /> To a better world,<br /> Chez bona.

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Thanx love
chezbona SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2014 at 9:29 pm
chezbona SILVER, Accra, Other
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your wildest imagination is just the beginning,make the sky your starting point.<br /> To a better world,<br /> Chez bona.

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Thanx fela
chezbona SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2014 at 9:28 pm
chezbona SILVER, Accra, Other
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your wildest imagination is just the beginning,make the sky your starting point.<br /> To a better world,<br /> Chez bona.

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Thank fela
Crystallite BRONZE said...
on Sep. 27 2014 at 9:13 pm
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this is so beautiful! nice work
chezbona SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2014 at 3:52 pm
chezbona SILVER, Accra, Other
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your wildest imagination is just the beginning,make the sky your starting point.<br /> To a better world,<br /> Chez bona.

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Perhaps dinner for two would do
Princess.Renda GOLD said...
on Sep. 23 2014 at 12:41 pm
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This is amazing, darlin! Absolutly lovley :) Keep writin, love! 
.L.C. SILVER said...
on Sep. 19 2014 at 8:50 pm
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Great poem....very lovely and meaningful
Love2Read72 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2014 at 6:19 pm
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This is really good. I like the last few lines a lot.
TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2014 at 6:17 pm
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this is so beautiful. It's hard to believe you're new around here. It's so poetic and full of depth and emotions and so lovely. I love the detail use. Keep it up just never stop writing. Definitely 5 stars ;) thank you for sharing this ^_^
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 18 2014 at 1:54 pm
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This is very sweet. You really have a talent and greatness today; I hope you know that. I can connect. Thank you for sharing this. ^_^
chezbona SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2014 at 9:49 pm
chezbona SILVER, Accra, Other
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Thank you You would get a lot
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I love it you really have talent and i hope to be able to read more of your work.