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I Was There

September 26, 2014
By CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

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You sang,

I was your song.

You wept,

I was your shoulder.

You tripped,

I picked you back up.

But when you died,

I cried.

© Chris C., Pequannock, NJ

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I hope this poem makes sence but if it doesn't it means that I was there for you until the end.

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This article has 4 comments.

WickedDreamer PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 6 2014 at 11:18 am
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
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This piece has something in it. Seriously. I felt blood rush all through me when I read it!   
goetz_17 SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2014 at 6:59 pm
goetz_17 SILVER, Odessa, Washington
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I relate  
LyricBlunt said...
on Oct. 23 2014 at 4:36 pm
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This piece or writing/poem is short like 1timothy412 said, but it is also beautiful it is kinda of sad that the person died, but you were there till the end, that is what counts. When I read this I though about my family, my friends, and evn other people I care about
PureDrawings BRONZE said...
on Oct. 4 2014 at 9:34 pm
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its short yet full or emotion. I love this. even tho it made me cry and remind me of someone.