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March 3, 2015
By Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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blame me

touch me

love me

 

even look at me, for i

might fall in love with you again. 

© Nasiha M., Huntsville, AL

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I'm having lots of feelings and I suppose this is my way of dealing with them.

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Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 3 2015 at 10:20 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you, blue... I don't know if I should be happy or sad you relate to this.
.king. SILVER said...
on Jun. 3 2015 at 11:26 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 569 comments

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( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

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So inspiring.. I feel I could relate.
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2015 at 12:50 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you very much, Amara.
Amara-rose GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2015 at 5:08 am
Amara-rose GOLD, Pendleton, Indiana
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Let go and live.

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I like this poem alot even tho it is short its very deep good job
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 2 2015 at 12:30 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you very much, Abby.
ABIGAIL.S PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2015 at 7:28 pm
ABIGAIL.S PLATINUM, Trenton, Ohio
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I have completely been there and wow you use so little words to show so much emotion, its inspiring to me.
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 10 2015 at 7:08 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Ahh, what?! I need to save your words and put them in my jar of things that make me happy. You're too kind.
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 10 2015 at 11:53 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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Thank you very much for the kind words. I wish I was nearly as good a writer as you are. Once again, congratulations on the talent.
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2015 at 9:16 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed this.
SCSKATE SILVER said...
on Mar. 8 2015 at 7:17 pm
SCSKATE SILVER, Austin, Texas
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I love the power of the word "again". Great piece.
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 8 2015 at 4:42 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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My favorite poet likes my poetry... What do I do, what do I do?! *fanboys* Thank you very much *bows*
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 6 2015 at 10:19 pm
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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Ah, this is great. Love the ambiguous vibe throughout the poem, and the title being a part of and apart from the poem is brilliant.