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Lover's Quarrel

November 9, 2015
By elliefeltovic SILVER, Simsbury, Connecticut
elliefeltovic SILVER, Simsbury, Connecticut
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Time is of the essence
I mustn't waste a minute
They’re coming now, they’re coming now
Time to duck and cover

It’s starting
The war has just begun
Their tongues the only weapon
The worst kind of them all

I watch as it begins to crumble
Everything I’ve known
She lashes here, swipes him there
In a tone so far from her own

Its almost over
The war is almost through
What will this hold
I long to be told
What trouble will ensue

The warriors are breathless
They’ve given up their blades
This troublesome plight
Has ended the fight
Worse than I’ve ever seen



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on Nov. 13 2015 at 9:17 am
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
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Favorite Quote:
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It could use some more poetic language though.

on Nov. 13 2015 at 9:15 am
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
LOOK AT MY PROFILE. DO IT.

This is rather sad...but I like the way it was written. Good job!