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Waking up

March 4, 2016
By DerickR SILVER, Cannon Falls, Minnesota
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Waking up at the crack of dawn
The feeling of bare feet on the dewy grass
The wind whistling in the trees
The thunder crackling like a whip
A column of air rotating in the distant
I head for cover but it was too late
The rotating column of air was closer than it appeared
My house was gone and nothing was left
Felt like my heart was ripped out and torn to pieces

© Daniel H., Oak Bluffs, MA

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