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Cold Heart

April 30, 2021
By WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf


Will I ever smile again?

Will the rain ever end?

Free me from my sadness,

Free me from my madness.

Pain tears me apart,

Pain stabs my heart.

Save me from this fate,

Before it's to late.

Wish upon a shooting star,

Wish to fly away.

Drown myself in song,

Or in a good book,

To forget about the world.

Will a smile return,

To warm my cold heart.


The author's comments:

This poem is about how life can bring you down and that some people are struggling to get a grip on themselves; how you can get down so low that it feels like nothing will ever get better. 


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on Apr. 27 2022 at 9:31 pm
LoversOrFighters SILVER, Walton, Kentucky
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Wow...beautiful. Just know that you can message me if you need to. Maybe we could co-write together?

on May. 7 2021 at 2:50 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

regardless, it was good enough i favorited it

on May. 4 2021 at 7:51 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

And it was song in the side note but It was supposed to be poem

on May. 4 2021 at 7:33 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks for the advice! I like your work as well.

on May. 4 2021 at 2:29 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

that was great!(i didnt read the sidenote)
btw if you keep up the rhymes it would be a limerick not free verse.