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Past .vs. Future

September 11, 2009
By Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
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Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
17 articles 2 photos 83 comments

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How come when you need something the most- that's the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

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The star is within my grasp.
Why can't I just reach up and pull it down?
Why must the future mock the past?
The smile on my face has turned to a frown.
I want to hear him call my name.
Wish he'd look at me and smile.
That girl before, that's who I blame.
We only talk once and a while.
Why do I feel like this today?
Is it necessary to even start liking him?
Why do I think about him and let my heart fray?
My thoughts are racing...Should I hate them?
Would it be better to remember or forget?
The things that were thought or what wasn't said.
Heaven forget that our weary eyes ever met.
I wish that after finding you, I was struck dead.
The torture in my head drives me to pain.
You walk like you own the world.
Am I crazy for wanting you so much, or vain?
My heart is not broken, only torn.
Yeah, I keep rambling on and on.
You're probably bored of reading my thoughts.
I wish that my dreams were answered not by the morning's dawn.
I'm not sad, nor regretful, I won't even say distraught.
All I can, unfortunately, say is-
Oh, how my heart called for you
and what do you do?
You push me away
and let our friendship fray.
Goodbye now, continue to doze,
because that door is no longer open-
It is now closed.

© Kari S., Mesa, AZ

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I wrote this for a guy I liked... Too bad he never read it.
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dylonmichael GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 11:53 pm
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
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i have two one is &quot;live life as if it were your last day on earth&quot; and two is &quot;never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing&quot;

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yea me too and things are not weird betweens us so it was like yay for me
Meago GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 3:02 pm
Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
17 articles 2 photos 83 comments

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How come when you need something the most- that&#039;s the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

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I'm glad you guys are still friends! lol
Meago GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 3:02 pm
Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
17 articles 2 photos 83 comments

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How come when you need something the most- that&#039;s the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

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Thanks! I tried to just let things flow and see where they go.
Meago GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 3:01 pm
Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
17 articles 2 photos 83 comments

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How come when you need something the most- that&#039;s the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

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Thanks for your feedback! I did check out your writing and I loved it! You need to keep writing also!
Meago GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 3:00 pm
Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
17 articles 2 photos 83 comments

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How come when you need something the most- that&#039;s the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

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I had no choice. It's hard to be pushed away so many times. I couldn't take it anymore. But, it's his loss. =)
Meago GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 2:59 pm
Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
17 articles 2 photos 83 comments

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How come when you need something the most- that&#039;s the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
SeeTheStars BRONZE said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 10:12 pm
SeeTheStars BRONZE, Sammamish, Washington
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&quot;An American monkey, after getting drunk on brandy, would never touch it again, and thus is much wiser than most men&quot;<br /> -Charles Darwi

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very very well worded. everything just flows together. loved it!
lamaczt said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 3:13 pm
I enjoyed this poem because it describes the past and the future of a friendship. They used to be friends and not so much anymore,"wishing he look at me and smile." He doesn't want friendship when he "push me away and let our friendship fray." The author gave up and let the door close on the friendship.
silentlove DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 4:51 pm
silentlove DIAMOND, Perrysburg, Ohio
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dance like nobodies watching, love like youve never been hurt, sing nobodies listning, live like its hevean on earth -mark twain<br /> worry always about the distance and you&#039;ll never make the jump -alana marsh &lt;3

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i loved this poem! it was very well written and conveyed the perfect message :) please check out my poems. i'd appreciate your comments! keep writing, expecialy like this!
Linica said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 2:08 pm
I enjoyed the way you started your poem. It really pulls in your readers. The whole idea of the poem was complex yet simple and you described everything wonderfully.
dylonmichael GOLD said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 12:35 pm
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is &quot;live life as if it were your last day on earth&quot; and two is &quot;never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing&quot;

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omg i loved it and i can relate well not the last part our friendship has not frayed we still are friends and i asked him out and he said no