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Move On

January 14, 2010
By CaptainFabulous. GOLD, Union, Missouri
CaptainFabulous. GOLD, Union, Missouri
11 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
PERSONAL FAVORITE QUOTE::::<br /> <br /> &quot;When life hands you lemons,make BEEF STEW!&quot;<br /> -Andy Milanokis?(sp)


Keep moving on,
No matter what happens,
You said you were strong,
So move on,
Move on.
Times may be tough,
I know you hurt to the touch,
But keep moving on,
Your troubles will soon be gone.
Your music plays,
You love this song,
So sing along,
And move on,
Move on.
A little bit longer and you'll be okay,
So keep moving on,
Day by day,
Your troubles will soon go away.
You said you were strong,
So keep moving on,
Move on.



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on Mar. 5 2010 at 6:25 pm
All I can say is wow.

This poem really inspired me.

You can take pride in knowing that you really affected someone in a positive way (:

This was incredible, I absolutely love it.

S1234 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 18 2010 at 6:53 pm
S1234 BRONZE, Pelham, New York
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I like this a lot. Keep on righting! Good work.

Comment on or rate my work if you can!!

on Feb. 15 2010 at 8:38 pm
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
54 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
poetry is a diary written out loud

i agree this is a really good poem. i liked it alot. you could make that into a song it would be really catchy.

Toni-Ann GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2010 at 4:22 pm
Toni-Ann GOLD, London, Other
12 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest

I love this poem. I totally get what your saying. just keep moving on. - - Amazing poem :)

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on Jan. 28 2010 at 6:16 pm
AAAAHHH, this makes sense now.....thanks for commenting on my poems. i was telling ms cook today about this site and she got all giggly and shes like "u have a true talent for writing, u r very good."

on Jan. 28 2010 at 4:27 pm
CaptainFabulous. GOLD, Union, Missouri
11 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
PERSONAL FAVORITE QUOTE::::<br /> <br /> &quot;When life hands you lemons,make BEEF STEW!&quot;<br /> -Andy Milanokis?(sp)

why thank you sarah XD

and this is basically me telling myself and others that no matter how bad things get you can always "keep moving on" dont let life get in your way

;)

on Jan. 27 2010 at 9:34 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
36 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;the greatest thing you&#039;ll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return.&quot; -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

WOW!! oh my lovely julie friend u have a great talent.....KEEP WORKING HARD!! wuts this about anyway??