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Embrace

March 9, 2010
By wtfkae BRONZE, Statesboro, Georgia
wtfkae BRONZE, Statesboro, Georgia
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Light surrounds every inch of my body. Overwhelming already heightened senses. Embracing, warmth entices the area around me. Lightly grazing my skin, Warmth, taunting with it's unknown sensations and slight vibrations only the heart and mind can sense. Tugging on every strand of my being. Calling to me, wanting me to accept the dazzling luminescence that can cause so much joy, yet so much pain. Warmth, Dancing in its perfect motion, beautiful to the eye, deadly to the touch.


The author's comments:
Well honestly, the idea for this came when I was at a bonfire, kind of ironic but yea, this is my first piece on here so be gentle :]

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wtfkae BRONZE said...
on May. 16 2010 at 8:39 pm
wtfkae BRONZE, Statesboro, Georgia
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Thank you guys, that really means a lot to me.

on Apr. 4 2010 at 1:19 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is really amazing. I love the emotions and images you bring about in this piece. Keep writing. If you have time, please check out my work.Ratings and comments are GREATLY appreciated.

on Mar. 31 2010 at 11:32 am
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars -Les Brown

I really liked this. It seems to me, though, that it could have a bit of a double meaning....interesting...