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Superiority

June 4, 2012
By PoetLaureate274 PLATINUM, Manitowoc, Wisconsin
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"You have not even begun to scratch the surface of how important your life means to not only me, [y]our friends and [y]our family, but your life, which is a gift for the world that is waiting for you." - Brent Smith.

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sometimes,
I feel like I'm above people.
superior,
smarter,
sometimes even divine.
I feel like nobody equals me,
that I'm one in my own.
People around me,
don't see the things I do.
I see simpler solutions,
to what they call complicated problems.
I don't like this feeling,
this overwhelming Superiority.
it is ever-present,
no matter how much I hide it.
I try to be my best,
I try to be my kindest.
but no matter what I do,
this Superiority remains...

© Andrew F., Lake In The Hills, IL

The author's comments:
an inner conflict that i often have expressed in words. to other peoples eyes, i'm a humble, kind person. but within, i know it and i relish it, and i hate that about myself.
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Brittany-NamedTheFluffMastahNumber2 GOLD said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 3:10 pm
Brittany-NamedTheFluffMastahNumber2 GOLD, Milford, Connecticut
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The person that you&#039;d take a bullet for is behind the trigger. <br /> (song)<br /> Miss Missing You - Fall Out Boy (:

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thank you so much:)        you're so nice!   
PoetLaureate274 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 28 2013 at 5:59 pm
PoetLaureate274 PLATINUM, Manitowoc, Wisconsin
20 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You have not even begun to scratch the surface of how important your life means to not only me, [y]our friends and [y]our family, but your life, which is a gift for the world that is waiting for you.&quot; - Brent Smith.

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thank you so much! you are good too. dont think otherwise
Brittany-NamedTheFluffMastahNumber2 GOLD said...
on Apr. 28 2013 at 9:43 am
Brittany-NamedTheFluffMastahNumber2 GOLD, Milford, Connecticut
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The person that you&#039;d take a bullet for is behind the trigger. <br /> (song)<br /> Miss Missing You - Fall Out Boy (:

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you are soo good at writing poems! never give up.