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Phoebe

December 8, 2012
By KatsK DIAMOND, Saint Paul, Minnesota
KatsK DIAMOND, Saint Paul, Minnesota
57 articles 0 photos 301 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being inexhaustible, life and nature are a constant stimulus for a creative mind.<br /> ~Hans Hofmann<br /> You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you.<br /> ~Ray Bradbury


Serene orb, shrouded
by veils of cotton-candy fog
terrestrial secrets keeping vigil
with the whispers of the stars
Her face is pockmarked,
porous craters full of faults
yet she does not
judge beauty by another’s eyes
Her voice softly
caresses the earth,
her whispers scented
like gentle mid
summer nights
Nights swarms her like plagues,
yet still she is hope


The author's comments:
I was inspired, one night, by the moon. This is also for the Interlochen Fiction contest.

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KatsK DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 1 2013 at 6:28 pm
KatsK DIAMOND, Saint Paul, Minnesota
57 articles 0 photos 301 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being inexhaustible, life and nature are a constant stimulus for a creative mind.<br /> ~Hans Hofmann<br /> You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you.<br /> ~Ray Bradbury

Thank you. Honestly, I don't get it either. I reread it, and yeah, the last line doesn't really make sense. I'm not really sure what I was thinking there .l.

on Apr. 1 2013 at 4:28 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

I didn't get it. I thought the imagery was stunning, but the last line was confusing :P