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The Love I'd Always Been Missing

June 1, 2013
By Brittany-NamedTheFluffMastahNumber2 GOLD, Milford, Connecticut
Brittany-NamedTheFluffMastahNumber2 GOLD, Milford, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
The person that you&#039;d take a bullet for is behind the trigger. <br /> (song)<br /> Miss Missing You - Fall Out Boy (:


I don't want to wake up every day
And know you're still gone
I don't wanna see you're away
Need your touch I've been missing so long

I don't know if you're coming back and I don't know when
Don't know if I should be dwelling on my past
Because you might not be coming back in the end
Wish I could've made our love last

Not one article of your clothing in the house
Not one reminder of you lying around
It's like you've disappeared without a trace
Been a while, can't picture your face

If you come back to me
Eventually somewhere down the road
Will you too see all the things we used to be?
All the things we'd known?

But now when I wake up every day
A new face is there
Smiling back at me
Meaning so much more to me, because they actually care

And hand in hand with interlocked fingers, walking in sync
I'm glad to say I've finally found the love I'd always been missing


The author's comments:
This is about a girl that loved a guy and he didn't feel the same way back. Now she has a new guy to make her feel worthwhile.

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on Jul. 22 2013 at 2:21 am
VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
One who make success without any trouble is victory, but one who make a success with lots of trouble is History.

u really rock buddy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Valery5 said...
on Jul. 19 2013 at 8:29 pm
Valery5, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
"What's bad for your heart is good for your art."

AAAWWWEEEEE!!! I FREAKING LOVE IT IT'S GREAT !!!!  for a sec i thought it was about me lolBUT SERIOUSLY IT WAS GREAT 

on Jul. 18 2013 at 10:17 am
BurrThistle GOLD, Jaipur, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Write to taste life twice, in the moment and in retrospect

the feelings are very raw and true. You got talent, girl. You just need to develop it. I agree, you need to work of the flow and rhythm of it but you'r good. An remember, you don't need a guy to make you feel worthwhile. :D  

on Jun. 12 2013 at 1:18 am
Brittany-NamedTheFluffMastahNumber2 GOLD, Milford, Connecticut
15 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
The person that you&#039;d take a bullet for is behind the trigger. <br /> (song)<br /> Miss Missing You - Fall Out Boy (:

thank you so much :)

on Jun. 12 2013 at 12:38 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who&#039;ll decide where to go...&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You&#039;ll Go!

I would mostly work on the rhythm. The meter seems unbalanced across the lines, but I liked some of the descriptions.